Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Haiku -- Astronomic Harbinger




Gazing at the moon
I am reminded again
the sun is shining.
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  1. SherrieNovember 13, 2008 at 11:03 AM

    Beautiful haikus, beautiful pictures.

    And haikus are my favorite.

    And harbinger is one of my favorite words!!!

    This particular poem reminds me of a sentiment in a song I know, that the sun's still above all the rain that may fall...so true and so hard to remember sometimes.

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  2. joannaNovember 14, 2008 at 10:53 AM

    Hmmm, that's a good one. I never thought about the moon that way!

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  3. Mrs. NNovember 14, 2008 at 7:46 PM

    Wow... this is a knock your sox off haiku. It's so beautiful. It debunks our associations and turns them into something positive... in so few words... Perfect. :)

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  4. dennistheeremiteMarch 9, 2009 at 7:55 PM

    Don,
    That really is a perfect haiku.
    Think you might be a Zen master (but a Christian one)!
    Dennis

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  5. DonMarch 9, 2009 at 8:02 PM

    Dennis,

    You get the award for digging into my blog's underbelly. (A four month old post, yet new to you.)

    I like to try various styles. There's a sonnet hidden in this blog as well! (My one and only.)

    Cousin Don (a Christ-zen)

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